i think that the idea is creative and your style works well with it. The main problem i see is your shading looks like dirt instead of shadow. But it's great none the less
Yeah the "shading" that you says looks like dirt is INDEED real dirt from the pencil smudge and the scanner picks that stuff up and looks messy. The shading I added is just a soft brush of gray and had no textures. This is usually what happens in my pencil comics heh since I don't bother to ink or clean them up. Glad you liked the comic anyways! :)
i think your style is nice and the idea is creative, but the electric pink is mis-used.Bright colours like the pink you used to much make this illustration makes it harder to look at. if you had done a less vibrant pink the piece would be a lot better.
I think its fine. Im used to bright colors so it doesnt bother me.
Actually you may be on to something cuz I can never look at this for too long
i think the simplicity is nice and it doesn't send the wrong message. The only thing that i can say is that the drinks are very detailed compared to the background. this force of focus can cause the image to become unnatural. i recommend either
1. make the background detailed
2. simplify the drinks.
Hmm maybe i shouldn't put the drinks there at all.
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