i think that the idea is creative and your style works well with it. The main problem i see is your shading looks like dirt instead of shadow. But it's great none the less
Yeah the "shading" that you says looks like dirt is INDEED real dirt from the pencil smudge and the scanner picks that stuff up and looks messy. The shading I added is just a soft brush of gray and had no textures. This is usually what happens in my pencil comics heh since I don't bother to ink or clean them up. Glad you liked the comic anyways! :)
i think your style is nice and the idea is creative, but the electric pink is mis-used.Bright colours like the pink you used to much make this illustration makes it harder to look at. if you had done a less vibrant pink the piece would be a lot better.
I think its fine. Im used to bright colors so it doesnt bother me.
Actually you may be on to something cuz I can never look at this for too long
i think that you did pretty well! the shading is smooth and not to dark and the expression is well managed, but some of the picture looks to masculine. like the shoulders are to broad and the neck and just above the chest have to many details. I would recommend to practice the difference between female and male bodies. Still really good though!
your art is great and the background create an atmosphere that is really hard to create. just one thing. The mouth doesn't work the same way. its mid way which doesnt convay much emotion. if you do arch the mouth to convey more it could arch up to be brushing of extreme pain or down (you know why) other then that great
Don't worry, I wasn't really trying to convey pain as much as scare. :)
your drawing is good and the emotion expressed is great. its just that for a couple the small line around the picture clashed with the actual drawing as you could've done better with saturated colours for them (e.g. the top left one). other then that great!
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